Is Watching on Youtube Helpful or Not?
Today, people have ever watched on Youtube. Youtube is a famous
media to watch news, videos, streaming, and video clip. YouTube is a video-sharing website, created by three former PayPal employees in February 2005 and owned by Google since late 2006, on which users can upload, view and share videos (Wikipedia). On youtube,
people could become famous and be an Youtube artist. What do you think
about watch on Youtube?. Watching on Youtube can be helpful, but
sometimes not.
First, we can use Youtube for making an assignment from school,
college or office. An example, if you have a Listening assignment like
make a news recording, you watch it on Youtube. You can search news from
many source like BBC, CNN, and NHK. Not only that, you can upload your
own videos on Youtube.
On the other hand, Youtube can be unhelpful because people can
watched something bad. All ages can watch Youtube. Some videos are
videos that probited for children. The videos aren't not good for them.
In conclusion, I think Youtube is very helpful because I can
watching anything that I need. Color, music and animated graphics can add a realistic impression. YouTube is also a medium to upload videos for free. The user can load, watch, and share video clips for free. YouTube is also very suitable for us who want to find information without having to read the article. So, you can not blaim Youtube. Its come
from yourself. It's up to you! How do you use it! And what is your
purpose to use Youtube!. And goverment ought to block the all bad videos on Youtube that children who are not old enough can not be free to watch the video on Youtube.
your essay is good. but you should to add more argument, because you only write one argument pro and contra.
ReplyDeletethank you.
You should add more ideas in your for and against paragraph.
ReplyDeletebecause your ideas are too narrow.
please be careful with the using of punctuation,
in p4line18 : Its come from yourself should be it comes from yourself.
that's all from me.
i think you should add more ideas in against paragraph, because i don't see your argument in against paragraph.
ReplyDeletealso, in second paragraph i think it is should be in general statement.
overall, this is a good topic to discuss