Puisi 1

Harus dikosongkan

Hati..

Abu-abu..

Sebuah harapan yang diselimuti oleh kabut

Kabut malam yang menutupi mata hati

Cinta..

Kebohongan..

Perasaan yang tak diterima

Kasih yang mungkin tak sampai

Kosong..

Hati yang harus dikosongkan

Ego..

Cinta yang tak bisa masuk karena ego

Langit malam..

Yang tak bernyawa bisa merasakan

Gelap gulita..

Yang tak melihat bisa mengerti

Dimanakah mata hati itu berada?

WRITING PROJECT 4 (REVIEW TEXT)

Surat Kecil Untuk Tuhan

Kinds of Novel     : Drama

Writer                    : Agnes Davonar

Publisher               : Inandra

Page                      : 232

Release date          : 2008

Price                      : 38.800,-

Country                 : Indonesia

Language              : Indonesia

Characters

·         Dinda Hauw - Keke

·         Esa Sigit - Andi

·         Egi John - Chika

·         Dwi Andhika - Kiki

·         Alex Komang - Ayah

·         Ranty Purnamasari - Ibu

·         Heri Savalas - Pak Yus

·         Indri Giana- Shifa

·         Maulidha Tiara Ningsih- Fachda

·         Vinessa Inez- Dinda

·         Sasa Nabila- Andini

·         Cut Nadya- Ida

·         Ayunda Gayatri Maheswari- Maya

Plot

Keke (Dinda Hauw) is a young girl with a loving father (Alex Komang) and mother, as well as loyal friends. She is diagnosed with Rhabdomyosar coma (a cancer of connective tissues), which is unusual at her age. After undergoing twenty-five sessions of chemotherapy, the once healthy and beautiful Keke finds herself sickly and bald, with a disfigured face. Although the treatment initially works, the cancer returns a year later.

Doctors estimate that Keke has three months to live. To help her deal with her pain, she begins keeping a diary; through her writing she finds the strength to hold on for a year. As she begins to accept her fate, she writes a letter to God in her diary, asking that her family be kept safe.

STRENGTHS, WEAKNESSES AND LACK

• Excess book:

A. The advantages of this novel is that it can make the reader lost in the stories told in this novel.

B. Another plus is that this is a story taken from real life and very touching.

C. This novel also attach some photos Keke struggle against malignant cancer to photograph friends at the funeral when Keke face our creator.

• Lack of books:

This novel has almost no flaws, but every man's work certainly has its drawbacks. Disadvantages of this novel are still writing the wrong and there is also the writing less interesting and difficult to understand.

• Weaknesses

Weaknesses of this novel , in which the words of the author that sometimes makes the reader imagine others in interpreting figures of speech writers .

Writing Project 3 ( Discussion Essay ) Revisi 2

Is Watching on Youtube Helpful or Not?

     Today, people have ever watched on Youtube. Youtube is a famous media to watch news, videos, streaming, and video clip. YouTube is a video-sharing website, created by three former PayPal employees in February 2005 and owned by Google since late 2006, on which users can upload, view and share videos (Wikipedia). On youtube, people could become famous and be an Youtube artist. What do you think about watch on Youtube?. Watching on Youtube can be helpful, but sometimes not.

     First, we can use Youtube for making an assignment from school, college or office. An example, if you have a Listening assignment like make a news recording, you watch it on Youtube. You can search news from many source like BBC, CNN, and NHK. Not only that, you can upload your own videos on Youtube.

     On the other hand, Youtube can be unhelpful because people can watched something bad. All ages can watch Youtube. Some videos are videos that probited for children. The videos aren't not good for them.

     In conclusion, I think Youtube is very helpful because I can watching anything that I need. Color, music and animated graphics can add a realistic impression. YouTube is also a medium to upload videos for free. The user can load, watch, and share video clips for free. YouTube is also very suitable for us who want to find information without having to read the article. So, you can not blaim Youtube. Its come from yourself. It's up to you! How do you use it! And what is your purpose to use Youtube!. And goverment ought to block the all bad videos on Youtube that children who are not old enough can not be free to watch the video on Youtube.

Writing Project 2 (Narative) Revisi 2

Glowie

    

Once upon a time, there was a girl who lived with her step mother and two step sisters in a big house, small town of forest. Her named Glowie. Glowie was a beautiful girl than her two step sisters. Glowie had long brown hair. Her hair was very long. When she was singing  nice song, her hair will shine. Glowie was worked in a cafe as a singer when she was leaved.

     Glowie's step mother and her step sisters were bad people. they made Glowie suffered in her own house. Her step mother forced Glowie to do all the house chores. Her step sisters weren't allowed Glowie to use her nice dresses and doll up.

     One day, royal envoy came to Glowie's house for announcing that the Kingdom will hold a party for their Prince. All of girls in the town had to come to the party. When Glowie heard that, she was very happy. But, her two step sisters and her step mother baned her to go anywhere the night.

     At the night, Glowie was cried because she wanted to go to the party, but she couldn't. When Glowie was cried, a fairy came to her. Then, the fairy made her became a beautiful girl with nice hair. the fairy told to Glowie that she had to come back at midnight because the magic would lose after the midnight. Glowie went to the party with beautiful blue dress. All people looked at to her. After that, The Prince asked Glowie to dance together. When they were dancing, they didn't realize the time was running to midnight. Glowie was surprised and ran to come back to her house before her step mother and her step sisters arrived. But,The Prince was hold Glowie's hair and got part of her hair.

     On the next day, royal envoy came again to Glowie's house to find who has the glow's hair. When Glowie was singing, her step mother blocked her in room.So, the royal envoy didn't find the own of glow's hair. And they leaved. In the noon, Glowie had a showed in a cafe and when she was singing, her hair was shining. The royal envoy that were being there, they looked at Glowie. Then they approached Glowie and showed haircut of Glowie. The royal envoy found the own of glow hair.

     Finally, Glowie and The Prince were married. Glowie's step mother and her step sisters were became a housekeeper and maid in Glowie's house. Glowie and the Prince were lived happily ever after.

Writing Project 2 ( Discussion Essay )

Is Watching on Youtube Helpful or Not?

     Today, people have ever watched on Youtube. Youtube is a famous media to watch news, videos, streaming, and video clip. On youtube, people can became famous and be an Youtube artist. What do you think about watch on Youtube?. Watching on Youtube can be helpful, but sometimes not.

     First, we can use Youtube for making an assignment from school, college or office. An example, if you have a Listening assignment like make a news recording, you watch it on Youtube. You can search news from many source like BBC, CNN, and NHK. Not only that, you can upload your own videos on Youtube.

     On the other hand, Youtube can be unhelpful because people can watched something bad. All ages can watch Youtube. Some videos are videos that probited for children. The videos aren't not good for them.

     In conclusion, I think Youtube is very helpful because I can watching anything that I need. So, you can not blaim Youtube. Its came form yourself. It's up to you! How do you use it! And what is ypur purpose to use Youtube!.

My Hopes on Writing 2

My Hopes on Writing 2 are ;
1. I wish I could improve my writing skill
2. I wish I could enjoy study in my writing 2 class
3. I wish I would get new knowlegde about writing

After I pased my Writing 1, I wish I would get god point on Writing 2.

My Experience on Writing 1 (Project 1)

My Experience on Writing 1

     I was studied Writing 1 on last semester. I studied it with Mr. Hafiz. As a English student at Universitas Negeri Padang, Writing 1 was an subject major that I had took it if I want to continue to the next subject. When I studied Writing 1, I got bad things and good things.

     Studying Writing 1 make me bored and sleepy. I think that all because the lecture's strategy not convenient for me. The lecture only gave writing theory with slide by slide on Microsoft power point. For me it was not good method for studying. And the time was not fit for learning. I studied at 13.20 p.m. It makes me sleepy because I had learned from 7 a.m.

     In addition, I always made my assignment on Writing 1. I only take 2 time for took my off day because I got sick. But, I got C on my Writing 1. I didn't know what happened. I think, it was my mistake.

     In conclusion, Writing 1 was a difficult subject. I got an important experience on Writing 1.

Writing Project 2 (Narative)

Glowie

     Once upon a time, there was a girl who lived with her step mother and two step sister in a tower, middle of forest. The girl's name was Glowie. Glowie was a beautiful girl than her two step sister. Glowie had long brown hair. Her hair was very long. When she was singing  nice song, her hair glow.

     Glowie's step mother and her step sisters are bad people. they made Glowie suffered in her own house. Her step mother was forcing Glowie to do all the house chores. Her step sisters weren't allowing Glowie to use her nice dresses and doll up.

     One day, royal envoy came to Glowie's house for announcing that the Kingdom will hold a part for their Prince. All of girls in the town had to come to the party. When Glowie heard that, she was very happy. But, her two step sisters and her step mother probed her to go anywhere the day.

     At the night, Glowie was crying because she wanted to go to the party, but she couldn't. When Glowie was crying, a fairy came to her. Then, the fairy made her became a beautiful girl with nice hair. the fairy told to Glowie that she had to come back at midnight because the magic would lose after the midnight. Glowie went to the party with beautiful blue dress. All people looked at to her. After that, The Prince asked Glowie to dance together. When they were dancing, they didn't realize the time was running to midnight. Glowie was surprised and ran to come back to her house before her step mother and her step sisters arrived. But,The Prince was hold Glowie's hair ang got her hair.

     On the next day, royal envoy came again to Glowie's house to find who has the glow's hair. When Glowie was singing, her step mother blocked her in room.So, the royal envoy didn't find the own of glow's hair. And they leaved. Glowie had a showed in a cafe and when she was singing, her hair was glowing. The royal envoy that ware being there, they looked at Glowie. Then they approached Glowie and showed haircut of Glowie. The royal envoy found the own of glow hair.

     Finally, Glowie and The Prince were married. Glowie's step mother and her step sisters were became a housekeeper and maid in a tower. Glowie and the Prince were living happily ever after.