Is Watching on Youtube Helpful or Not?
Today, people have ever watched on Youtube. Youtube is a famous media to watch news, videos, streaming, and video clip. On youtube, people can became famous and be an Youtube artist. What do you think about watch on Youtube?. Watching on Youtube can be helpful, but sometimes not.
First, we can use Youtube for making an assignment from school, college or office. An example, if you have a Listening assignment like make a news recording, you watch it on Youtube. You can search news from many source like BBC, CNN, and NHK. Not only that, you can upload your own videos on Youtube.
On the other hand, Youtube can be unhelpful because people can watched something bad. All ages can watch Youtube. Some videos are videos that probited for children. The videos aren't not good for them.
In conclusion, I think Youtube is very helpful because I can watching anything that I need. So, you can not blaim Youtube. Its came form yourself. It's up to you! How do you use it! And what is ypur purpose to use Youtube!.
I like your topic discussion..
ReplyDeleteits very good.. I agree with you opinion that youtube very helpful,
But it will be better that you should add more your idea in your agreement,
that's all from me
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ReplyDeleteyour essay is good Mitha. but i found there are some mistakes in your easay
ReplyDeletep1l1 "Today, people have ever watched on Youtube" you should write "Today, many people watches on Youtube". in your essay you must use simple present tense and present perfect tense
Arguments for and againts should be developed. for essay is too simple. you should add some sources and explaination . may be you can tell the examples or something else.
Just it
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Word in Line 2 can became should be "could become"
ReplyDeleteWord in Line 10 form should be "from"
I think you should add more idea in your essay.
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in P1: "On youtube, people can became famous and be an Youtube artist" it should be replaced with "On youtube, people can be a famous artist instantly".
ReplyDelete-you must write the general statement for your essay to know what will be argued in your essay.
- don't forget to take 'full stop' in the end sentence.
and you have to develop your essay with add some sources and ideas to make it better.
that's all :)
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"an Youtube artist" it should be "an artist on youtube"
ReplyDelete"can not blaim" it should be "can not blame"
i think you should add more opinions in pros and cons side, because your paragraph is too short and too simple.
:) ;)