Wednesday, October 9, 2013

WRITING PROJECT 4 (REVIEW TEXT)

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Kinds of Novel     : Drama
Writer                    : Agnes Davonar
Publisher               : Inandra
Page                      : 232
Release date          : 2008
Price                      : 38.800,-
Country                 : Indonesia
Language              : Indonesia
Characters
·         Dinda Hauw - Keke
·         Esa Sigit - Andi
·         Egi John - Chika
·         Dwi Andhika - Kiki
·         Alex Komang - Ayah
·         Ranty Purnamasari - Ibu
·         Heri Savalas - Pak Yus
·         Indri Giana- Shifa
·         Maulidha Tiara Ningsih- Fachda
·         Vinessa Inez- Dinda
·         Sasa Nabila- Andini
·         Cut Nadya- Ida
·         Ayunda Gayatri Maheswari- Maya





Plot
Keke (Dinda Hauw) is a young girl with a loving father (Alex Komang) and mother, as well as loyal friends. She is diagnosed with Rhabdomyosar coma (a cancer of connective tissues), which is unusual at her age. After undergoing twenty-five sessions of chemotherapy, the once healthy and beautiful Keke finds herself sickly and bald, with a disfigured face. Although the treatment initially works, the cancer returns a year later.
Doctors estimate that Keke has three months to live. To help her deal with her pain, she begins keeping a diary; through her writing she finds the strength to hold on for a year. As she begins to accept her fate, she writes a letter to God in her diary, asking that her family be kept safe.

STRENGTHS, WEAKNESSES AND LACK
• Excess book:
A. The advantages of this novel is that it can make the reader lost in the stories told in this novel.
B. Another plus is that this is a story taken from real life and very touching.
C. This novel also attach some photos Keke struggle against malignant cancer to photograph friends at the funeral when Keke face our creator.
• Lack of books:
This novel has almost no flaws, but every man's work certainly has its drawbacks. Disadvantages of this novel are still writing the wrong and there is also the writing less interesting and difficult to understand.
• Weaknesses


Weaknesses of this novel , in which the words of the author that sometimes makes the reader imagine others in interpreting figures of speech writers .

5 comments:

  1. your review is good.
    I think you should to develop it again and make your opinion for this novel.
    do you think this novel is good.
    I think you should to make moral value from this book.

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  2. Mita, the book that you had review is good. But, I'll give some addition and opinion to your review text.
    1. I think you don't need to mention the price of the novel, because the price of the novel is different in every book store.
    2. Are lack and weakness same? I confused about that. If they are same, you may combine them.

    :)

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  3. well, mitha overall is good.
    but I think there some missed in your novel review like you should add the achievement of these book or award..
    and give ur opnion 'bout these book, and give ur recommandation for people to read these novel..
    that's all from me :)

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  4. actually, i am little bit conused about your reviewed. are you reviewing a novel or movie?
    if you reviewing a novel, you should just make a name o character (i hope you know what i mean). i think you should add your recomendation of this novel. also, don't forget to add a reward or achievement of this novel.
    overall, this is good. Good Job.

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  5. Mitha, it’s better for you to start each of your paragraphs with opening statement (generalization)
    In p2 L 1, “doctors estimate that Keke has three months to live” it should be “doctors predict Keke just has…”
    P2 L 11, what do you mean by lost in the stories?
    L 13, … to photograph friends at the funeral when Keke face our creator… What does it mean?
    “There is also the writing less interesting and difficult to understand.” It should be “The writers write some ideas those not interesting and hard to understand.”
    That’s all from me.
    *keep writing and do the best*

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